This is my first draft front cover, to improve upon this i received feedback from peers and from my target audience.
what went well:
The colour coordination is good, but most importantly it is very clear, the masthead is strong in addition to this the two tone colour used within the masthead links back to the colours used for other headlines.
The black outline merging into the picture works well as it comes together instead of just having an original black outline.
Headlines are symmetrical instead of just being plotted all around the front cover which works
Improvements
'page 3&4' is not needed as it is out of place in addition to this, readers will be able to find this information in the contents page.
'Poetic Justice' needs to be written properly, capital letters needed, this also needs to be done for 'Enemies'
It needs a date as it is missing one either 'issue 1' or an actual date will work.
'Velli' puff needs to be bigger as this is the main artist which the magazine is focusing on.
Bring down the 'JHAZ' and 'Prophet AKA Big MALZ' puff down as it is too high up
Rotate the bar-code and put the price tag above it.
The picture needs editing, all the grass in the back ground is not needed, makes the front cover poor
The picture needs editing, all the grass in the back ground is not needed, makes the front cover poor
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